That's the key thing for me. This was brought home to
me when I began reading Neil Plakcy's MAHU.
MAHU is a police procedural set in Hawaii. It's about Kimo Kanapa'aka, a mixed
race homicide detective with a secret--and it's not his passion for surfing.
Now I'm not that interested in Hawaii. It's always seemed like a place full
of tourists and way too much sunshine (I'm more of a rainy day guy). And I often
have problems with police procedurals--mostly due to the way cops are portrayed.
(Is it mandatory that every homicide detective be haunted by the memory of having
let that mega-crazed serial killer dispatch that one particular victim in front
of him?)
Now, I will say here and now that Plakcy does a terrific job of describing Hawaii--both
the Hawaii tourists know and the "real" Hawaii. Excellent eye for
evocative detail. And he does a good job with describing police procedure and
routine--enough to give veracity but not so much as to overwhelm the story.
He's done his research but he's not hitting us over the head with his nightstick.
But what kept me reading late into the night was the character of Kimo. And
I'm trying to think what it is that makes this character so...likeable. He starts
off the novel with a huge lapse in judgement, so why the hell are we immediately
and totally on his side?
Yes, he seems...real. But that's not necessarily an endorsement since a lot
of characters I don't want to spend five minutes with seem real. Really obnoxious,
in fact. Yeah, Kimo has a sense of humor but he's not like a falling down funny
guy. One of the main things readers talk about with Adrien English is his sense
of humor, so by comparison, I would say humor is not the big draw here. Maybe
it's the sincerity of tone. The book is first person and Kimo's "voice"
is simple and unprevaricating. This is not to say that he doesn't lie, but he
doesn't lie to himself (or, by extension, the reader).
Maybe it's the normalcy of this character--the lack of archness or quirkiness.
Quirkiness has been so overdone of late. A character needs to be more than a
set of mannerisms or nervous tics.
Maybe it's his competency--which, if you're going to have a cop protag, you'd
think was a requirement (but you'd be surprised). It's refreshing to read about
a smart character--and because we accept that this character is smart and honest,
we forgive his occasional lapse of good sense. We all make mistakes, but you
can't excuse perennially dumb characters on the basis of there really being
a lot of dumb people in the world. Yes, truth is stranger than fiction, but
I don't want spend my free time in the company of a moron (fictional or otherwise).